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Subject: Wolves in the City Mon May 25, 2009 6:12 am
this is a work in progress.. i have the lyircs done (sorta) gunna work on the music later feel free to suggest
vERSE 1 when i was a young boy my father said to me if you go to the city do this for me watch where you're going be ready to run because my son.....
CHORUS in the shadows they lurk in the filthy murk they watch..they hunger..gleaming red eyes THERES WOLVES IN THE CITAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YEAH THEY'RES WOLVES IN THE CITAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WOLVES IN THE CITAYYYYYYYYYYYYY WOLVES IN THEY CITAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WOLVES IN THE CITAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
VERSE 2 I said to my father papa it cant be true its just a silly story for children.......in their beds.......hiding their heads so they dont misbehave but papa im older now i wont run from silly stooories your trying to make me worry but papa im bigger now im not going to run from shadows im not going to hide under my bed im not going to cry home to mommy theres no wolves in THE CITAYYYYY
[CHORUS]
son your so foolish fine dont heed my words but just wait watch and see in the shadows they do lurk they're gunna hunt you down you're gunna hit the ground you're not gunna have any fun they're gunna sniff you out you're gunna run and shout because THERES WOLVES IN THE CITAYYYYYYYYY
[CHORUS]
MIDDLE EIGHT *wolves* in they shdows we lurk in the filthy murk we watch..we hunger...gleaming red eyes look at the foolish boy unheeding of wise words we'll hunt him down he'll hit the ground he's not going to have any fun where the bad things smirk that's where we work we're gunna sniff him out he's gunna run and shout now we show him what nightmares ARE
[CHORUS TO FADE]
EDIT: Holy shit vallore ur a drummer...we should do a collab..reckon you could do a drum track for this im trying to get the guitar track down...
Vallorerules Elite Death Knight
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Mon May 25, 2009 6:44 am
yeah i can try
i also have this song ringing in my head as i read that.. but more the bit at 0.45
but i actually really like the lyrics! they're fun! energetic! the only problem is that some of the syllables don't work, like: when i was a young boy, my father said to me, go into the city, and just do this for me. watch where you're going, be ready, to run. because my son.....
but say what your trying to make it cuz with that song up there ringing in my head it's probably something unlike what you want XD
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Mon May 25, 2009 6:50 am
verses a-melodic..chorus screamo...wolves part is all harsh and sitorted and demonic yeah it makes more sense if you read it in rythm and shit
Vallorerules Elite Death Knight
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Mon May 25, 2009 8:12 am
gottit, i checkout out that papa roach song, looks great!
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Mon May 25, 2009 6:16 pm
Did you really write this? Lyrics are pretty good. What genre is it?
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Mon May 25, 2009 7:13 pm
yes i wrote this. hmm genre somewhere in the realm of rock-hard rock
Vallorerules Elite Death Knight
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Thu May 28, 2009 10:13 am
like that Papa Roach song you sent me
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Sun May 31, 2009 7:19 am
Hey, thats kinda good...especially if you wrote it yourself!
Vallorerules Elite Death Knight
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Sun May 31, 2009 10:10 am
what's a middle eight again? it came up in my exam.. i failed that! xD
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Sun May 31, 2009 7:21 pm
you dont know what a middle eight is? christ almighty its the bit in the middle usually comprising of eight bars XD usually the bit with the solo in it if u listen to rock and metal and shit
Vallorerules Elite Death Knight
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:29 pm
lol thanks xD i think i put roughly that, just making sure
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Subject: Re: Wolves in the City Sat Jun 06, 2009 11:24 am
I just have one question. Did you by any chance use this song to help you?
Lyric's (I found a few similar words in yours but I just think it is a random coincidence): When I was a young boy My father took me into the city To see a marching band He said, "Son, when you grow up Would you be the savior of the broken The beaten and the damned??
He said, "Will you defeat them Your demons and all the non-believers The plans that they have made? Because one day, I'll leave you A phantom to lead you in the summer To join the Black Parade"
Sometimes I get the feeling She's watching over me And other times I feel like I should go And through it all, the rise and fall The bodies in the streets And when you're gone we want you all to know
We'll carry on, we'll carry on And though you're dead and gone, believe me Your memory will carry on, we'll carry on And in my heart, I can't contain it The anthem won't explain it
And while that sends you reeling From decimated dreams Your misery and hate will kill us all So paint it black and take it back Let's shout out loud and clear Do you fight it to the end?
We hear the call to carry on, we'll carry on And though you're dead and gone, believe me Your memory will carry on, we'll carry on And though you're broken and defeated You're weary widow marches
On and on we carry through the fears Disappointed faces of your peers Take a look at me 'Cause I could not care at all
Do or die, you'll never make me Because the world will never take my heart Though you try, you'll never break me We want it all, we wanna play this part
Won't explain or say I'm sorry I'm unashamed, I'm gonna show my scar Give a cheer for all the broken Listen here, because it's only
I'm just a man, I'm not a hero Just a boy who wanna sing his song Just a man, I'm not a hero I don't care!
We'll carry on, we'll carry on And though you're dead and gone, believe me Your memory will carry on, you'll carry on And though you're broken and defeated You're weary widow marches on
Do or die, you'll never make me Because the world will never take my heart Though you try, you'll never break me We want it all, we wanna play this part [We'll carry on]
Do or die, you'll never make me Because the world will never take my heart Though you try, you'll never break me We want it all, we wanna play this part [We'll carry on]
Subject: Wolves in the City 
Mon May 25, 2009 6:12 am
